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wPuri sermonis amator |
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Politics and Pop Culture.
And occasionally informative, amusing, or bizzare non sequiturs.
Matt's in charge here, others can post.
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wMonday, April 21, 2003 |
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Go read my first draft. Critique. The last essay we did got only 1 review. Besides, you might like reading it. Or maybe not.
I like the intro more now. Post comments here, on the journal, or e-mail saiyukic@yahoo.com.
Update: found a formatting error and a sentence that was misplaced. Fixed it. 3:09 pm Monday.
Update 2: Yes, the essay sucks, it's not just the intro. The message is muddled and it's contrived. Stupid lack of vision or clarity. Stupid lack of message. Grr. It took me 3 hours to do this piece of crap. Isn't that sad?
Update 3: I revised it with the links Matt gave me(they were really good!), and I dodged some things I couldn't get sufficient refrences for. I think it's a bit better now. Same link.
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Anonymous at 2:58 PM
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